Well i will dedicate this book to the kids we writing it to, to me, and to my family because i dedicate everything to my family. I choose to dedicate this book to the kids because were creating it for them. If it was not for them we would not be doing this project. I dedicate it to me because i took the time to write this book.
The importance of acknowledging people in your writing is to tell them you possibly got ideas from them, and that the people reading your book give them some credit as well. Acknowledging people also lets the people know that you care about where you ideas came from, and that person, or people is very important to the authors life.
Brett Nave
Sunday, November 7, 2010
Day 27
el maestro y el estudiante- means the teacher, and the student translated into spanish so thats one i was considering because this is just a remake of it. Another would be the lying teacher because thats what the scene of the story is. Also the smart student- this kid is smart, and tricks his teacher out of his lies that he tells his class. I'm considering avoiding issues. I choose this because there are a lot of issues and problems that my character encounters in my version of the story, and that some problems are better avoided. My last option would be the cunning kid. I choose this because i think it's a title the little kids would like, and because this kid is smart.
Day 26
My story is going rather good. It has a halloween theme for the kids even though halloween is over. My story is going good besides the pictures. I don't know when were really going to really start making these books but I'm getting anxious, and excited about it. Another things is about the blogs.
They help very much but I'm real lazy to go back and look to get ideas to build my story, but i have to. Also looking back at the blogs help me generate new ideas. Going back over them gets my mind on track when i get lost which is a lot of the time.
They help very much but I'm real lazy to go back and look to get ideas to build my story, but i have to. Also looking back at the blogs help me generate new ideas. Going back over them gets my mind on track when i get lost which is a lot of the time.
Day 25
I like the flow of my story. Everything falls right into place, and i love my style of writing. It's very descriptive, and uses imagery. I like to place good images inside the readers mind to get into character against the antagonist. I like for the reader to feel involved in the story so they are suspenseful. My story when read aloud sounds really good and scary. My style really doesn't keep the story together it just gets the reader feeling like they are in the story themselves. I like for people to have emotion when reading my script. My story sounds good to me, even though it is a little stereotypical.
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Day 24
I would say that my story would most likely be number 3, and number 4. Reasons that i would say this is because, My character overcomes his problems with his teacher, but not by his own though. It was sort of a coincidence, or a very slim chance that he caught his teacher up in a lie. It was all up to chance that he dreamed of the virgin mary. Reason it's number 4 is because of the bad influences are outfaced with the help of the fauna in the story. He stops hanging around all the negative people around his village because the mythical creature prevents him from attempting bad things. The overall climax i would say though would be when he catches the teacher in the lie.
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
DAY 23
I would say my character has two social responsibilities. The first one is to decipher the truth about things exactly like the way he broke through the teachers lies. The second one is to maintain at home and to stay away from the wrong group of people. Reason is because my my main character Juan, wants to become successful at what he wants to do, and in order to do that you have to maintain focus and avoid people that can turn you away from your success.
Social responsibility to me are responsibilities, or jobs that u need to do that benefit you, and the public around you as well. The term "social responsibility" remains completely clear to me, and that's what makes this blog hard to do. I applied the social responsibility of my character deciphering the truth because it's benefiting him, but it's also helping others around him know the truth about things which is benefiting the public. The other one was staying away from the wrong people. I chose this because by staying away from the bad, he's benefiting himself, and could possibly change the minds of the others.
Social responsibility to me are responsibilities, or jobs that u need to do that benefit you, and the public around you as well. The term "social responsibility" remains completely clear to me, and that's what makes this blog hard to do. I applied the social responsibility of my character deciphering the truth because it's benefiting him, but it's also helping others around him know the truth about things which is benefiting the public. The other one was staying away from the wrong people. I chose this because by staying away from the bad, he's benefiting himself, and could possibly change the minds of the others.
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
Day 22
The theme of my story is don't tell lies get. This happens in everyday life so i think its important to just tell the truth because in the end lies will catch up with you. Also the moral lesson included will be don't hang out with the wrong people because they can put you on the brink of death. T
hings that i will write about will obviously be about him and the teacher arguing about him falling asleep in class. I'm going to write about the Chupacabra to help Juan keep out of trouble. I have to write about him seeing the Virgin Mary because without that part of the story the lies is excluded. I have to include his bad friends. Also i have to write about the characters personalities.
hings that i will write about will obviously be about him and the teacher arguing about him falling asleep in class. I'm going to write about the Chupacabra to help Juan keep out of trouble. I have to write about him seeing the Virgin Mary because without that part of the story the lies is excluded. I have to include his bad friends. Also i have to write about the characters personalities.
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