Monday, October 25, 2010

Day 13

My folk-tale provides that the message within my text. Is to never lie because lies inly get you tied up. That is the essential message of my story.I want to share the same message with my story, There really can't be any changes to the message being conveyed. I can only add moral lessons. There isn't much to change in this story with the lesson being taught. I can only change, or add another lesson because if i alter anything in my story other than the student outsmarting the teacher the message itself will change no matter which culture, a lie is a lie, there all misleading, and bad.
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2 comments:

  1. Taj BrimmerOctober 26, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    Your post is good just make sure that it is in two paragraphs.

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  2. Jarelle EasterwoodOctober 26, 2010 at 8:41 AM

    TWO PARAGRAPHS...oh wait Taj said that...

    Also, a few grammar mistakes.

    All you're really doing is talking about how you CAN'T change the moral of your story (which takes up about half of the paragraph, really). If you need help, I can post ideas of what you could put to add more length into the blog.

    Have a nice day.

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