Monday, October 25, 2010
Day 14
To begin the story will start off during the day, and since the kid in my story is a lazy bum, the mythical creature is there to give him an extra push to school, and to keep him out of trouble with the outside world if you don't realize that. Day 1- He runs to school being chased by the creature on october 30. The teacher falls to sleep in class he ask the teacher why are so so lazy, and the teacher responds with that's how i get your lessons. From the Virgin Mary. So the kid falls for it. The bell rings and he goes home, and he sees some of his friends doing bad things in the streets, but once he tries to join them the Creature comes out of nowhere and chases him home. He stays in the rest of the night wondering why Mr. Chavez goes to sleep for his lessons, and how a mythical being like a chupacabra comes out of nowhere. He stays up the rest of the night horrified. Day 2- He goes to school in the next morning and is so tired and exhausted from staying up late. So he falls asleep, and in his dream he sees Mary and all her children around her. Juan decides to ask Holy Mary does she give the lessons taught in class by Mr. Chavez, and Mary replies,"I've never seen Mr. Chavez in my life." So he catches the teacher in his lie. The teacher gets mad and throws him in detention until six O'clock. After the detention it's already dark. It is around 6:30. So when him and his friends see each other in the street, they go around vandalizing things. Once again the Mythical being comes out of nowhere and only chases Juan. But why? It's to get the boy out of trouble and so he realizes that he's hanging around the wrong group of people who are peer pressuring him, and negatively influecing his life.
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Good Job, You really explained everything you needed to know for the chronological order. It is coming out great, keep up the good work :D
ReplyDeleteAgain...spelling mistakes...grammar mistakes...you know the deal =/ Also, TWO PARAGRAPHS =D
ReplyDeleteThis story sounds interesting...I like how detailed your information is.
Have a nice day.