Critique-Although i did a good job on my animoto i felt that i could have done better on it. I only spent 20 minutes. I felt that i could have put more effort in my animoto. Even though i told my story through the pictures i felt that i could have found more elegant pictures.
Criticism-Some of the pictures of the animoto were a little mature for little kids. that is one negative about it. Another thing i felt could have been improved was more pictures to tell the story perfectly, but there was not enough slides.
Congrats-Congratulate myself because i felt good about it because, number one, i got it done. Number two i taught i my story through my pictures. I thought this was an excellent idea so the people could get images about my story. I think the morals are great in my story.
AGAIN: grammar, spelling, you know the deal... =/ TWO PARAGRAPHS!!!
ReplyDeleteYou pictures were a bit...weird (not really sure what they had to do with your story). You spent about ten minutes giving us an introduction on what you were going to say...don't worry, I would've done the same thing.
It's good to know your faults, or else you can't fix them. I don't think you liked presenting very well =/I don't like it either, but we all gotta do it sometime.
Have a nice day.